송지원 선생님(2022.06.27)

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I live in a studio by myself. In my room, I have a desk, a bed, a closet, a hanger, and a bookcase. I have clothes for each season in my closet. The clothes I wear often are hung on the hanger. My favorite furniture is the bookcase. Books that I enjoyed reading are shelved in the bookcase. It feels like I get smarter when I see a lot of books on it. On weekends, I spend time lying in front of the bookshelf reading books. That’s all I can say about my home.