문장만들기 관련해서 And my favorite movie title is The Lord of Ther Rings. The director is Peter Jackson. 문장이런식으로 쓰는거에 대해서도 문제 없는건가요???

It is an exciting movies, about war movies. 이문장이랑 Usually, I watch movies at home, because it is comfortabel 이 문장들도 이런식으로 썻을때 문법적으로나 형식적으로 틀린거 없나 봐주세요

I like to drink cafe mocha, That is good quality. 이거랑 In the coffee shop, I study and take a rest, during study I can concentrate well 이문장도 이런식으로 썻을때 문제 없는건가요??

In spring, we can see cherry blossoms, in my school. That is great, And in winter, we are able to make a snowman, making a snowman is fun, To keep healthy, I do anaerobic exercising. at home, 이 문장들도 문법적으로나 형식적으로 틀린부분 있으면 알려주세요