파트5 학습 중에 아래와 같이 영작해보았는데요, 논리성이나 문법적으로 부족한 부분 알려주시면 감사하겠습니다! P218. 작가 sns 사용 장점. Because, you can promote your work for free. 2 years ago, a new author promoted his work on SNS such as Facebook. Then his followers gradually increased. As a result, he became a famous author without using marketing expenses P221. 과거보다 부정확한 기사 많다는 것에 "동의". Because, it is important to increase the number of clicks. In my case, I usually read news articles on the Internet. But, there are many exaggerated headlines. So, i don't trust news articles. P221. 과거보다 부정확한 기사 많다는 것에 "비"동의. Because, it is possible to revise the article quickly. Nowadays, people usually read news articles on the Internet. Online news articles can revised by smart phone anywhere at anytime So, there are few inaccurate news articles *추가질문)  modify/correct + article은 어색한가요? 동사로 Revise만 사용해야하는지 궁금합니다!