나의 답변
In a conversation with my professor, I discussed with him about changing my final essay. He suggested that how to searching for my topic, which is Monet, that I've thought it before, then I'll mull it over and activating that guidance.

선생님답변
I was speaking with my professor because I was thinking bout changing the topic of my final essay. He thought it would be a bad idea because I had already started my preparation. He told me there are lots of information about Monet on the Internet and offered to send some website __link__s to me. In the end, I decided to stick with my original topic after speaking with him.

질문 : 1분30초안에 일단 저정도가 현재는 저의 답안수준 max입니다.
선생님 답변은 문제 내용에 대해 많이 서술되어있는 것같고 저의 답변은 좀 뭉뚱그려져있는것같기도합니다.
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