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[시원스쿨 오픽 IM-IH] 5강. 가구묘사 입니다 피드백 부탁드립니다
작성자 : 박창*·등록일 : 2022.06.22·조회수 : 1,248·답변수 : 1
I live in a studio by myself. In my room, I have a desk, a bed, a closet, a hanger, and a bookcase. There are four seasons of clothes in the closet. The clothes I wear often are hung on the hanger. My favorite furniture is a bookcase. There are books in the bookcase that I enjoyed reading. I think I become smart when I see a lot of books on it. On weekends, I spend time lying in front of the bookshelf reading books. That’s all I can say about my home
답변을 남기면 지식 점수 10점 획득! 답변 추천을 받으면 추가 점수를 받을 수 있어요! (본인 질문 제외)
송지원 선생님의 답변
( 2022.06.27 )
안녕하세요! 전반적으로 잘 하셨습니다 :)
아래와 같이 고쳐 드리니 참고 해 주세요!
I live in a studio by myself. In my room, I have a desk, a bed, a closet, a hanger, and a bookcase. I have clothes for each season in my closet. The clothes I wear often are hung on the hanger. My favorite furniture is the bookcase. Books that I enjoyed reading are shelved in the bookcase. It feels like I get smarter when I see a lot of books on it. On weekends, I spend time lying in front of the bookshelf reading books. That’s all I can say about my home.
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