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거주지 묘사
I've been living in sacheon alone for one years in a studio apartment
I live on the 3th floor of a 5-story studio apartment building
As soon as I enter my house, I see a kitchen and bathroom on the forward,
on the left, there is a master bedroom
with many windows, so a lot of sunlight comes in
Our studio apartment building is old home, so it's very cheap
I'm very satisfied with it
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( 2022.05.23 )
I've been living in Sacheon alone for one year in a studio apartment.
I live on the 3th floor of a 5-story studio apartment building.
To tell you about how it looks, as soon as I enter my house, I see a kitchen and bathroom.
On the left, there is a master bedroom with many windows, so a lot of sunlight comes in.
Our studio apartment building is pretty old, so it's very cheap.
Overall, I'm very satisfied with it.
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