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작성자 : 한혜*·등록일 : 2021.06.18·조회수 : 1,261·답변수 : 1
I think there are many advantages of traveling to one country compare to visiting several countries. Most of all people can save money and time not to transferring other countries. ---> 다른나라로 옮겨 다니지 않아 시간과 돈을 절약할 수 있다. 라고 간결하게 말하고 싶어서 not to~ 를 쓴 것인데 문법에 맞는지요? In my case, I have joined a package tour in Europe 3 years ago. At that time i visited 10 countries in 2 weeks but I was unsatisfied with it because i only could stay a few spots and went back to the bus or train. Also it was expensive since we took many kinds of transportation. Therefore, I think people can enjoy their travel more by visiting one country compare to visiting several countries. 감사합니다^^
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( 2021.06.20 )
Most of all people can save money and time not to transferring other countries.
- because we don't have to move to other countries 가 좋겠습니다.
but I was unsatisfied with it because i only could stay a few spots and went back to the bus or train. Also it was expensive since we took many kinds of transportation.
- not satisfied
- stay at a few places
나머지는 괜찮습니다 :D
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